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Author: vivididol
Created: January 10, 2012 at 02:07 pm
Entry Type: Poem, E (Explicit Language)
Category: Erotica | Adult | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments 510 views

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i will not let my refinement
deflect me from the rawness
of your naked beauty.
i want you on your knees
not as a supplicant
but as a tease.
your gaping wound
gives birth to violet fantasies
of violence and pain
i am not ashamed
to take pleasure in your shame.


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Uranusisfunny
February 23, 2012

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honest
maybe too honest... i like it... even if it is a bit disturbing to think about... now you have me wondering just how many romance junkies are secretly masochistic.... as it all ends tragically... couldn't comment the last time i read this, as it was too disturbing a thought at that moment. nice write as usual... no spotlight

vivididol
February 27, 2012
(Creator)
"too honest", now there's an interesting contradiction : ) as always i enjoy other's interpretation of my work (usually says more about them than me ; )



user26209
January 27, 2012

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Strong, powerful, and dominant....you let us as the reader fill in the lines...

vivididol
January 27, 2012
(Creator)
thank you .. yes the reader deserves that : )



lalipenz
January 11, 2012

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5
I vote super hot super hot super hot great stuff

vivididol
January 11, 2012
(Creator)
thank you (as always) for your kind review : )



Mastema01
January 10, 2012

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HA, vivid to the imaginations eye
and a cool read
Cheers
Be well
~M~

vivididol
January 11, 2012
(Creator)
thank you for your review and good wishes. take care : )



snulf
January 10, 2012

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hauntingly beautiful,
short and simple, the emotions shine through,

great job dear keep it up xo

vivididol
January 11, 2012
(Creator)
i am pleased with your reaction. thank you for reviewing : )



dream1dancer
January 10, 2012

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Good Write
Yikes...good write..easy read..very understandable.

vivididol
January 11, 2012
(Creator)
thank you kindly : )






      

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