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A Poem by vivididol



Author: vivididol
Created: January 10, 2012 at 02:07 pm
Upload Type: Poem, E (Explicit Language)  
Category: Erotica | Adult | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments and 514 views

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i will not let my refinement
deflect me from the rawness
of your naked beauty.
i want you on your knees
not as a supplicant
but as a tease.
your gaping wound
gives birth to violet fantasies
of violence and pain
i am not ashamed
to take pleasure in your shame.


© vivididol - all rights reserved

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Uranusisfunny
February 23, 2012
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honest
maybe too honest... i like it... even if it is a bit disturbing to think about... now you have me wondering just how many romance junkies are secretly masochistic.... as it all ends tragically... couldn't comment the last time i read this, as it was too disturbing a thought at that moment. nice write as usual... no spotlight



(Author)
"too honest", now there's an interesting contradiction : ) as always i enjoy other's interpretation of my work (usually says more about them than me ; )

 vivididol replied on February 27, 2012




user26209
January 27, 2012
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Strong, powerful, and dominant....you let us as the reader fill in the lines...



(Author)
thank you .. yes the reader deserves that : )

 vivididol replied on January 27, 2012




lalipenz
January 11, 2012
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5
I vote super hot super hot super hot great stuff



(Author)
thank you (as always) for your kind review : )

 vivididol replied on January 11, 2012




Mastema01
January 10, 2012
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HA, vivid to the imaginations eye
and a cool read
Cheers
Be well
~M~



(Author)
thank you for your review and good wishes. take care : )

 vivididol replied on January 11, 2012




snulf
January 10, 2012
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hauntingly beautiful,
short and simple, the emotions shine through,

great job dear keep it up xo



(Author)
i am pleased with your reaction. thank you for reviewing : )

 vivididol replied on January 11, 2012




dream1dancer
January 10, 2012
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Good Write
Yikes...good write..easy read..very understandable.



(Author)
thank you kindly : )

 vivididol replied on January 11, 2012






      

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