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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: January 10, 2012 at 12:27 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Inspirational | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 242 views

raging water  

I see a spirit angry, of the wave of fury causing mighty typhoons or tidal waves.

But the water goddess, spirit dwells inside of the mighty whirlpool.

Instead bring in major waves, it is sleeping like a good goddess.

Listen to soft music, like metal or good rock n roll.

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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May 01, 2012
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you seem very intuned to the spiritual side of life, Water personifies grace, serenity and vulnerability (in my opinion) and i believe that you did an amazing job juxtaposing the raging waves to the serene goddess of water.

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January 12, 2012
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You rock thunder.

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January 11, 2012
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Agree with Galactic
This did have a very surreal kind of spiritualism and reverence for nature Loved it and the feeling the wordage you chose lent to it gives it a very ageless feel. Well done on this delightful work poetic bro.
Yours Kassie

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January 10, 2012
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very good
Water is a spiritual conveyance and does hold vibrations for us to tune into. Thanks for sharing Thunderstrom

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