I'm Not Interested in You


Author: LoveLoi20
Created: December 16, 2011 at 11:41 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Contemporary | Environment | Psychology
Entry Stats: 2 comments 122 views

I'm Not Interested in You
“I'm Not Interested in You”
Written by Loi in 2008
And revised in 2011

I don't have a heart for you man
So you got to stay away from me
Don't you understand how I feel?
I'm disappearing and so you won't see

I'm not interested in you
your heart got scars, says who?
I don't say in name but you
I'll have to tell you finish man

You still want me
And your heart have started growing in
Whoa pleased me for wanting to date me
I say NO
I don't know how this argument worked
For saying no to you
Let me tell you one more time

I'm not interested in you
I learned something about which fit me right
I don't want you
And your heart of me is too tight
So, let it go
You don't need me
You need me for what?
For me, why do you want to see?
But I'm not interested in you, period.



Author Notes
This poem is based on every woman who had that experience.

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Comments & Reviews

IAmNoPoet
December 17, 2011

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confusing
and jumpy. And your authors note are also confusing. :-(

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jkalwaye
December 17, 2011

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beautifully written love refusal poem.thank you .bye

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