A Poem by LoveLoi20

Author: LoveLoi20
Created: December 09, 2011 at 10:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Environment | Despair
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Life Is Not Fair

“Life Is Not Fair”
Written by Loi in 2007
And revised in 2011

everybody have life is not fair
the law is changed and we humans says, "That's not fair."
We feel that the law doesn't care about us
but how can we deal with unfair life?

Life is not fair
and that's how everyone feels
we probably have to go through with unfair life

why don't we deal with unfair life?
We must handle to care
To care for people
We want to be fair
We don't understand why can't its bear
Why does it makes us feel down with unfair life
We still struggle to remove the unfair life
But still life is not fair
And that is life
Life is not fair
and that's not fun!

© LoveLoi20 - all rights reserved

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January 22, 2012
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I agree Loi, life is not fair, but we have to make it work anyway. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep it up!


 LoveLoi20 replied on January 31, 2012

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