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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: December 09, 2011 at 07:55 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Free Verse | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 149 views

A Thunder of LOVE  

Under the stormy sky you have found me
Though darkness was overwhelming,
In your adoring eyes I was shimmering
As if your sight was meant only to see me

So fragile; I was like a child shivering
In fear of the monsters under my sheet
But your hand was warm, so calming
My every skin felt so much fire with it

On the mirror I did see my face;
It didnít seem my true reflection
But your soul is as clear as ice,
I found myself in contemplation

And now as my eyes meet the sky,
The blinding glimmer of the sun
Makes these tears shine like ray
For all my prayers have been done

For under that stormy sky,
You have brought me
A thunder of love


© MagicMJ - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)



desean
May 07, 2013
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very good
this poem was very good


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MichaelFrost
December 18, 2011
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Gorgeous
Perfect pace and straight to the point! I am wondering if this fits the persona of the writer? Hmmmm?

Truly enjoyed and if you do not mind, shared this with my family.

--Michael Frost



(Author)
ahaha... Thanks a lot for the stars & claps miss your scary stuffs

 MagicMJ replied on February 07, 2012




Kassandra
December 09, 2011
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Awww an elegantly charming piece. Really nice energy with this write and I loved it.
Yours Kassie

Typo:
My every skin felt so much fire with it (My whole skin)



(Author)
ahaha THANKS a lot dear Kass hopefully I'm really back at writing

 MagicMJ replied on December 09, 2011






      

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