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A Thunder of LOVE

Author: MagicMJ
Created: December 09, 2011 at 07:55 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | Free Verse | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 145 views

A Thunder of LOVE 
Under the stormy sky you have found me
Though darkness was overwhelming,
In your adoring eyes I was shimmering
As if your sight was meant only to see me

So fragile; I was like a child shivering
In fear of the monsters under my sheet
But your hand was warm, so calming
My every skin felt so much fire with it

On the mirror I did see my face;
It didnít seem my true reflection
But your soul is as clear as ice,
I found myself in contemplation

And now as my eyes meet the sky,
The blinding glimmer of the sun
Makes these tears shine like ray
For all my prayers have been done

For under that stormy sky,
You have brought me
A thunder of love

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

May 07, 2013

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very good
this poem was very good

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December 18, 2011

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Perfect pace and straight to the point! I am wondering if this fits the persona of the writer? Hmmmm?

Truly enjoyed and if you do not mind, shared this with my family.

--Michael Frost

February 07, 2012
ahaha... Thanks a lot for the stars & claps miss your scary stuffs

December 09, 2011

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Awww an elegantly charming piece. Really nice energy with this write and I loved it.
Yours Kassie

My every skin felt so much fire with it (My whole skin)

December 09, 2011
ahaha THANKS a lot dear Kass hopefully I'm really back at writing


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