Profile Home My Writing About Me Latest News
Message Me Members Area Writers-Network Upgrade to PRO
A Thunder of LOVE


Author: MagicMJ
Created: December 09, 2011 at 07:55 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | Free Verse | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 108 views
A Thunder of LOVE 
Under the stormy sky you have found me
Though darkness was overwhelming,
In your adoring eyes I was shimmering
As if your sight was meant only to see me

So fragile; I was like a child shivering
In fear of the monsters under my sheet
But your hand was warm, so calming
My every skin felt so much fire with it

On the mirror I did see my face;
It didn’t seem my true reflection
But your soul is as clear as ice,
I found myself in contemplation

And now as my eyes meet the sky,
The blinding glimmer of the sun
Makes these tears shine like ray
For all my prayers have been done

For under that stormy sky,
You have brought me
A thunder of love

The author would love to hear your feedback but you must be logged in to do that. If you are a member of Writers-Network click here to login and review this writing entry.

Not a member? Not a problem! You can register here, it's free for everyone

Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

desean
May 07, 2013

Helpful: Thumbs Up Thumbs Down
very good
this poem was very good
 Additional Comments (0)

There are no comments on this review.


MichaelFrost
December 18, 2011

Helpful: Thumbs Up Thumbs Down
Gorgeous
Perfect pace and straight to the point! I am wondering if this fits the persona of the writer? Hmmmm?

Truly enjoyed and if you do not mind, shared this with my family.

--Michael Frost
 Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
February 07, 2012
(Creator) 		ahaha... Thanks a lot for the stars & claps miss your scary stuffs



Kassandra
December 09, 2011

Helpful: Thumbs Up Thumbs Down
Awww an elegantly charming piece. Really nice energy with this write and I loved it.
Yours Kassie

Typo:
My every skin felt so much fire with it (My whole skin)
 Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 09, 2011
(Creator) 		ahaha THANKS a lot dear Kass hopefully I'm really back at writing






      

Authors, Share Your Book with Millions of Readers







Sponsored Ads By Members



   Writers-Network.com was granted non-exclusive rights to display this work.
   All poetry, stories, columns & other member contributions are owned by the poster
   © Writers-Network.com - All Rights Reserved
   Get Your Free Poetry Site!  |  Read Todays' Writing  |  Dump The Banners!