for her


Author: AUDREY23
Created: December 02, 2011 at 05:32 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Sad | Relationships | Romance
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 90 views

for her 
look at the way you touch me,
like your hands are experiencing me for the first time.
you feel me up,
and use my body as a canvas for your finger paints.
you are artist,
and i, am your art.
you strum me like a lyre,
and i hum a gentle hum.
we harmonize wildly.
if i ever loved the way that you do,
i would be an epic, trying to widdle away at my life's work
only to bring about my downfall.
for years you have touched me differently.
now you touch me like the world is ending.
like this is the last time you will ever get to explore me... because it is
sadly, you were merely warming up for her.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

teddy
February 21, 2012

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Hello :D
Hey, my name is Teddy. And I was looking around and I found your website. I really like your poem it was sad and heartbroken. You know when you read a poem sometimes int puts you in a mood, well this poem has me in a LOVE Land. Hahaha..........great work. I really liked this I wanted to spotlight and I will . Thanks for the great write

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Your Friend, Teddy :smile:

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slanfia
December 18, 2011

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This is indeed a sad poem, but beautiful and communicative. I particularly like this line:

now you touch me like the world is ending.

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Exxiesheartbreak
December 02, 2011

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Deep
Wow...this is a very moving write full of passion and sadness. Keep up the ncie work, Exxie


Exxiesheartbreak
December 02, 2011
*nice(sorry bout the typos)



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