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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 12, 2006 at 06:11 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 375 views

***When I...***  

***When I...***

When I dream my love,
I dream of
You.
When I dance my heart out,
Itís you
Iím thinking about.
When I eat my chicken,
I pretend
Itís you
Iím licking.
When I go to bed at night,
There you are
And all is right.
I bet everything
On you,
And Iím certain itís the only prudent
Perfect thing to do.



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Comments & Reviews



sgking123
February 17, 2006
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Its amzing how the idea came through.


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drowning_in_you
February 14, 2006
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Nice work Iviedoe


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sgking123
February 13, 2006
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Swell work Has Come Out now


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MaryJane
February 12, 2006
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Oh this is so cute! Very charming. I enjoyed.


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BobQuinn
February 12, 2006
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Hello Iviedo! Knew as soon as I saw the pink print this would be entertaining and, sure enough! Love the part about chicken.
Hey, did you recieve your copy of "Retro Rhymes?" I'll send you an antiqued page of the longer "Gettysburg" Later my friend


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