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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: October 19, 2011 at 08:39 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Spiritual | Friendship | Friendship
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 211 views

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Sunlight provided the heat, gathering the rays of friendship.

Night with a lit of dark, inside the deepness of the chilled finger tips.

To smell the glory, of fresh ink writing on sheet of blank paper.

I paused for a moment, brain storming in my poetic mind.

Sometimes when I scratch my noggin, good things is always to see the light.

Or listen to your iPod; jam out with your favorite tunes like Rap country Rock it doesn’t matter.

I want to thank my friend and a brother to me Mr. Deviant writer88 you Rock bro

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October 19, 2011
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Bro!!! Aw man thanks so much so very very much!!! I loved this one, especially the second stanza, ' Night with a lit of dark' - that is very creative and thoughtful

I love fountain pen and sad that I don't have them here but I always had markings on my hand and I really did love its smell on the paper. This is beautiful poetry my Rock Brother!!!

Keep Rocking!!! and hope to see more and more and LOTS more from you

Your Rock Brother, Rock Friend, and Fan!!!!

Deviant Writer

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