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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: February 08, 2006 at 03:10 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 440 views



Once I am able
To pick myself up off the floor;
While drowning in your eyes,
I find I crave you even more.
There’s just so much,
This tiny girl can take,
But this tiny girl’s just
Not willing to break,
Before she totally gives in.
Maybe it’s a fantasy
She lives to begin;
And making it so,
Will only give her
Something to know.
Believe in and show.
So be careful, Sir,
At what you say or do;
Because this tiny girl’s,
So in love with you…

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June 08, 2006
kinda deep in its own way.

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February 17, 2006
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Its amzing how the idea came through.

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February 12, 2006
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Oh wooow, this is really really good! I loved it!!! Im voting for it lol!!!

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