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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 27, 2006 at 06:45 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 342 views

~~~Forever~~~  

~~~Forever~~~


Forever my thoughts have turned towards
Someone just like you.

Forever I have longed to look lovingly into
Eyes just like yours.

Forever I have fantasized sweetly whispered conversations
Spoken from a heart just like yours.

Forever and ever I have lusted and desired to
make love with someone I idealized
Was just as you are.

Forever I have had the acute need to be deeply
and truly in love
With "The One"

~~~AND~~~

Forever I have dreamed that "THE ONE" would be
deeply and truly in love with me as well,
Just as you are.

Forever and in all my days I have prayed to God,
For one just as you are.

Forever I have cared for, yearned for, lusted after, desired deeply and have searched my world for you,
Just you, David.

~~~AND~~~

Forever and in all-ways I have known that if you ever showed up in my life,
That we would have an ultimate, unbreakable love~
~Forever~


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June 08, 2006
good for you,happy for you.


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MaryJane
January 27, 2006
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this is beautiful! I loved it. Amazing!!


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msautter
January 27, 2006
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David is a very fortunate man. Your love was beautifuuly expressed. I'm jealous. Just one minor critique; spell-check this piece. There are a few inconsequential mistakes. Otherwise, I wish I could give this to my fiance and claim it as my own.


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