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♥ ~~Flying~~ ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 27, 2006 at 05:04 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 3.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 325 views
~~Flying~~ 
~~Flying~~

Flying for the first time
Can be a splattering on the sidewalk at best~
Cruising once you've got the drift,
Means a steady beat and a killer rift!

Can it really be this way forever?
Will I fy better and more perfect each day?
It would break my heat of hearts,
Should my skills wobble or fray.

Smoking like a chimney these days,
Just trying to chase the blues.
Looking for bridges without sways,
And praying for sunshine hues.

I've figured out all I rally need,
Is your loving understanding,
And your slow hand while making love~~
Your soft spoken words so sweet in your handling,
And God's blessings from above~

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drowning_in_you
February 14, 2006

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Even when you write something that is not your best you still manage to make it more beautiful or emotional than a good 50% of most people posting here these days.I'm so glad to see youare finally getting back to your old self after leaving us for so long.
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melissa
January 27, 2006

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Loved it!!!
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msautter
January 27, 2006

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Could yoju please change the color? I'm sure it is a wonderful poem (judging by "Forever") but, I can't read the yellow against the white background.
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