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A Poem by Lillylilly

Author: Lillylilly
Created: August 15, 2011 at 05:32 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 14 users with 17 comments and 369 views

I love the feeling of...  


I love the feeling of closing my eyes
As I dream of flower in precious
Time from the depths of the earth
Where she rises again in the moonlight

She is the color of the love
Her petals caress my heart
And like the bird of paradise sings
Our favorite song and captivates
My soul by her sweet tongue

When she calls me in whispers
I let her take me in her open arms
And grow under the care of her loving eyes

My racing mind of confused thoughts
Like a wave of light spread Throughout
The sky and with stars I smile
In every second of my flight a thousand times
Say hello to my pure God
Oh, what treasures I do find



L.K /Lilly.2011-08-15
2011


Last Modified: June 30, 2013 at 12:03 am
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Comments & Reviews ( X 28)



silverwings
August 20, 2011
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Beautiful
You have such a lovely outlook on life...I treasure yor ability to do so...Luv Jules...



(Author)
Thank u so much for your sweet review.be happy my dear poet

 Lillylilly replied on August 21, 2011




OhdarlingIwis
August 20, 2011
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This is just...simple stunning. Well done my love, spotlight for sure. x) <3
~Ohdarling.



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear poet for your beautiful review...

 Lillylilly replied on August 21, 2011




DeviantWriter88
August 19, 2011
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Simply Ecstatic

I'm left all dreamy and smiley, this poem leaves me all peaceful and I can feel the strong love it has. Yes there is someone who could be so special to us and could leave us all lost in them and we simply want to be with them. Every single word is laced with love and I bet everyone reading this poem definitely smiled and definitely must have lost them in this beautiful poem! I know I did!!


Your friend and fan for sure,
Deviant writer



(Author)
oh..my dear Devian Thank u so much for your lovely review...your review is beautiful & sweet like your poems.
I am your friend & fan too for sure

 Lillylilly replied on August 21, 2011




sharon
August 19, 2011
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amazing!!!!
that was great i really dont know how i could say this with out being weird and i dont know if any one will understand but i felt every word you said it was powerful.....And i really enjoyed the rhyme



(Author)
Thank u so much for your nice review....be happy always my dear poet

 Lillylilly replied on August 21, 2011




Exxiesheartbreak
August 19, 2011
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Splendid!
Oh my dear friend Lilly...this is one of the loveliest poems ever! I adore every gorgeous word..your friend and fan, Exxie



(Author)
my dear flower thank u so much for your lovely review and your positive feeling....love for u too my dear angel.

 Lillylilly replied on August 21, 2011




LoveLoi20
August 17, 2011
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so beautiful
your writing is so beautiful and well expression of the love. Great love poem!~Love Loi~



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear

 Lillylilly replied on August 18, 2011




cjaymac
August 17, 2011
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A work of art
One of the most beautiful poems of love that I have read! Truly amazing word expression that has created a poetic gem! Love it! God Bless, CJ.



(Author)
my dear friend thank u so much for your lovely review....
happy u loved this one. be happy always my dear

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




se7enking
August 16, 2011
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truly greatness
Loved the nice write about love......it was truly greatness....keep it up ......i love this website of writers keep it up



(Author)
Hi my dear poet, Thank u so much for your sweet review .
I love u my dear poet & this website too. be happy always

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




jediallday
August 16, 2011
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stunning
An absolute treasure. Lilly, your poems are like birds of paradise, colourful, beautiful and utterly unique.



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear Paul by your magical pen write a sweet review for me. Thank u so much for your positive words....be happy always

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




BellaDonaLea
August 16, 2011
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Gorgeous Lilly!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, this totally captivated me. So beautiful my dear friend. You are so talented with your pen. You bless us with class and divine precious words, just as your poetry expresses. You show such grace and love in your writing Lilly. It is wonderful to read your works of pure art! Thank you for sharing such a mesmerizing and phenominal pieces with us. This is deffinately one of your best! I love ya! Blessing to you. Ur fan, Dona. SPOTLIGHT FOR SURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



(Author)
My dear Dona, Hi ....my dear woman thank u so much for this lovely review. Thank u so much you care to my work & encourage me by your so positive words.
I kiss your beautiful eyes & your wisdom hands to write this wonderful review.
My lovely friend i love your pen & yours too.
I love you too By happy always

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




kntinaz
August 16, 2011
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(sigh) the warmth of loves dream, the heart you have returned to me
for now I close my eyes remembering your words
and now I rest in the precious thoughts you have shown me
Lilly the soft ache of your pen and such a loving heart
many a upon your stage..Thanks for sharing...Tony



(Author)
oh...My dear Tony . so beautiful Sigh.....very lovely review & feelings..
I loved you close your nice eyes when you have precious thoughts in your head.
Thank u so much my dear for your sweet support

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




lalipenz
August 16, 2011
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5
Lilly dear this is so beautiful I don't have words to express my feelings beauty after all is beauty



(Author)
My lovely man, my dear Lali i got what is in your heart.
thank u so much you called it Beauty ...very nice & valuable description.
Be happy my friend

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




philip19
August 16, 2011
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You have a loving heart Lilly and this is a lovely write-flowers in the moonlight-exquisite
The sky and with stars I smile-so do I lilly-spotlight--philip.



(Author)
My dear phillip , Thank u so much for your beautiful review ..
My dear poet i love your lovely eyes to my poetry .with big affection

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




DewmanX4
August 15, 2011
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Love is Grand
You so have a way with words and this piece flows like the wave of the ocean for love is some ones heart is a great thing...

WOW



(Author)
My dear Dewman Thank u so much for your nice review, i love it when you care to my works. be happy

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




user20962
August 15, 2011
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I remember
Now through your words the soft throws of adoration and love. This is as soft as the caress of a feather, it is so very beautiful.
It creates a vision of a young lady daydreaming, reminiscing and smiling with all that she feels and has. Oh what treasures indeed!
Wonderful write Woo ;0))



(Author)
Hi, Thank u so much for your exciting & your lovely review.
i loved your sweet attention to my poetry my dear friend , Be happy

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




SanExpeditus
August 15, 2011
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Sensational!
WoW Lilly, what a way to begin my week, with the words that feed my soul with the food of love. I am never, ever complacent about your poetry, my dearest poetess, you amaze me completely with your mind, heart and tongue.

'I love the feeling of...' is a deeply exhonerating write, each glorious line is a hymn of devotion described by the majesty of the elements and the beautiful sources within them. Lilly, I envy your heart that pulses inside your pen, but I love your warm soul too much to feel even a particle of sadness for this reality. Your poems are hauntingly profound and completely natural to your thought process. Bravo, flower!



(Author)
Hi my dear San, My special woman for your great attention & pure affection to me & my poetry.
very lovely words , i am proud of it , i really loved your wisdom eyes to see me with this way.
it is wonderful , you with a great energy hug me & caress my soul.
Just , i can say , thank u so much , you always make smile on my lips .
You open a beautiful lamp in my mind & help me to see what i can not lonely .
You are a true friend , i really love u & i pray be happy forever.

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011


Goodness, Lilly, such a wonderful phrase..'open a beautiful lamp in my mind'... such is the light that shines for all of these poets here who love you and your work.

Never be lonely, flower, for love does not recognise time and distance. Love & affection, San.

 SanExpeditus replied on August 17, 2011


(Author)
oh..yes.
I know with you & my lovely friends i enjoy every day more.
Thank u again for your love & affection

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011




Dancer26
August 15, 2011
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This was beautiful Lilly. Such a wonderful piece expressing love.



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear dancer , i missed u s much for you & your sweet poetry

 Lillylilly replied on August 17, 2011






      

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