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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 18, 2006 at 09:47 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 472 views

Breathless Kiss (part 2)  

You lay me back in the meadows lush
So that we are as close as two can be,
We moan low and groan slow as we pull and push.
The nightbird's song begins, by and for you and me

Our passion buils hot between us
So fast, then slowed to a crawl,
And faster again to lighter then deeper.
In out around one another, so in love we fall.
Getting it on and getting down low,
Taking the high road, we'll do it all.
Rightside up and backwards we go,
Inside out and forwards, yes to and fro.
Together in ribbons moving towards what we know~~
~We are what we find,
~~When becoming one in mind.
For the inercia in the urgengy of now,
And the heft of our bond in our vow,
To always head it's tender call...

Just like the tide makes it's way
To steadily flooding the shore,
We ebb and flow as we sway,
Further reaching, needing more.

We move like the dancing of the water's waves,
As we search out each beloved destination.
Round sea shells, rocks, coves and caves,
Seeping with ooze and without hesitation.

Exhale my love, come into my sacred place,
How sweet the blast of your pearls makes me feel.
Your loving hands cup my sweet face,
Closer, closer, closer still we rock and we reel.
~~~So real,we heal,
And breath easier, deeply, softer and fuller.
~~~So much a meal.

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January 19, 2006
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NICE! It's been a while Ivie where have you been?? Miss seeing your work a lot...hope to see more of them soon...keep writing

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January 19, 2006
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ok you've got me...I seriously dont know if there is really anything I can say that would do justice to how great this amaze me.

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January 18, 2006
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Wow lol!!! I am little jeolous ... Im just playing lol ... Loved it!!! It's nice to have you back, and bless us with your wonderful poetry which I have been waiting on Loved it! Thannx also for the comments on mine appreciate it

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January 18, 2006
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Umm, now the maturity comes out. I Love It!! Again the imagry is so vivid. YM mind plays out your words as I read them. Truly wonderful. Another great poem.

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