♥ Breathless Kiss (part 1) ♥
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Author:
iviedoeloves
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| Created: January 18, 2006 at 09:10 pm |
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Entry Type:
Poem, G (All)
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| Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other |
| Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 468 views |
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Breathless Kiss (part 1) 
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As soft as evening first surrounds us
With the wash of twighlight's hues,
Your touch also bathes me~
With warm yellows, tickle me pinks and baby blues.
And the meadows delight does come alive
As the shadows grow thin and long,
Here dragonflys and junebugs thrive
And the time is ripe for the nightbird's song.
Humming with a buzz in all the cool places
Here where day becomes night,
Longing to belong in the spaces
Of your loved one's evening delight.
Where there are urges in our bodies,
Mundane ideas are crowded out by the bliss.
So the battle is won or lost in the mind,
Best to commence with a soft slow breathless kiss
And so your tongue slips
In and around my parted lips
My heart, you make it leap about,
Then with all purpose and leaving no doubt,
~~You kiss me deep and knowing
That within this bliss, we'll keep on going.
Butterflys, Junebugs
Dragonflys and some frogs,
hootowls hunting some mice,
~~Squirrels watching from some hollow logs,
They all bear wittness as one
That we are taking it further now,
~As we fondle one another here alone~
Gently we meet in kisses so sweet,
And the moon's glow takes on a lover's tone.
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Comments & Reviews |
January 20, 2006
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Of course I loved it. You didn't forget the nightbird and the hootowl. MoM |
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