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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: January 15, 2006 at 03:41 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 384 views

~Above and Beyond~  

~Above and beyond~

Harmony and hangups happen~
Shake hand with reality my sweet.
And most everything can end in blesssings,
When you learn to live on blessing's street.

It's potholes and sporadic cracks
Are there for characters sake.
Not for it's own, but for those
Who's roads they take.

Leading to higher ground,
means a trip into a fall at times~
For humblenesses' tunes are all around,
Squashing with harmony, hangups and it's crimes.

We all live under the same sun, moon and stars~
Love is all most of us are really looking for,
That and attractive, economic cars...
Oh yes, and the ocean where it begins at the shore

Hard, and a hardship, this search for love.
Much like the hangup for the perfect ride!
~~~~You must learn
To smell the nature around you from above.
One will soon find
oneself empty to just simply abide.

It's a state of mind.
It's a way of life.
It's something you'll find~
Above and beyond so called strife.





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Comments & Reviews



sfiawong
January 26, 2006
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Good imagination, I think your ability can improve higher class of poems in the future.


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drowning_in_you
January 19, 2006
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my words would only fall short had I a description for this


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MaryJane
January 18, 2006
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Wooooow your amazing!!! I loved it! Very inspiring!


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