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♥ Oh So ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: January 14, 2006 at 10:28 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 323 views
Oh So 
Oh so
Oh so
Oh so
Oh so in love with you
Don't you know
I am your dove
So I write these silly lines of love
There's so much to say about this subject
But for now I'll say just because
Of my deepest love you are the object
I could hem and haw
Sea and saw with a wishy washy hint
Like fuzzy pocket lint
But I'd rather you be bedazzeled
By the glint
Of my true affection on all levels
In your awesome direction

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sfiawong
January 26, 2006

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Simple but express enough. Very good to say 'so', you wrote.
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drowning_in_you
January 19, 2006

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Even a poem that is not your best is still better than most of the work that I am seeing these days
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melissa
January 18, 2006

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lol this is so cute, loved it!
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brokenhearted
January 14, 2006

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I love this! Keep up the good work..... *Sarah*
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