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Author: Lillylilly

Created: July 18, 2011 at 05:45 am

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.45 Stars by 10 users with 11 comments 280 views

The natureСs intercourse

ЕЕЕ.Е.When sky cuddles the earth
ЕЕ.And sheds love drops in itСs pure holes
ЕЕ....To the loveliest music of the clouds
ЕЕЕЕЕЕ...I will born as rose
.Е..And the fruit of the natureСs intercourse

L.K /Lilly.2011-07-18
й 2011

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soulpoem
August 24, 2011

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Amazing

I will have to give you a kiss for this wonderfully exotic piece dear Lily. I love to write poems on nature but the boldness and simplicity you have shown here is unreachable. Your thoughts and imaginations are superb. Loved this short yet deeply touching piece.

Additional Comments (1)

Lillylilly
August 26, 2011
(Creator)

Thank u so much for your kiss & your charming words...
Happy u liked this one too

be happy my dear always

Vashthestampede0
July 23, 2011

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:-D

pure beauty :-D

Regards
Vash T.S

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Lillylilly
July 26, 2011
(Creator)

Thank u so much my dear vash...

cjaymac
July 21, 2011

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Perfect poetry

The poetic mind at its best! Astounded by the sheer beauty of this, Lilly! A poetry gem! God Bless, CJ.

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Thank u so much my dear poet for your sweet review..

lalipenz
July 21, 2011

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5 & super

Dear Lilly it seems you have forgotten me I am guilty here too but can't help just too much work
this is a brilliant poem from a poet coming off age super job spotlight

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lalipenz
July 21, 2011

Correction :
I will be born a rose

Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

hi...i never forget u ...hehe are u sad in this review for what?1
I love u my dear poet & adore your pen & your personality always.
be happy my dear Lali..your lilly and Fan:d

lalipenz
July 25, 2011

thank you that was reassuring ... but to see you in another man's arms oh ... how that hurts ha ha ha he he he hahaha I can't stop laughing

Richieluv
July 19, 2011

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I love it.

Its simply told.

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Thank u so much my dear friend

kntinaz
July 19, 2011

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That which was dry brown
now becomith greener
that which was within the ground
now the sights for a dreamer

So very good Lilly, I love your perspective of our mother nature and I adore the way you have written of her...Thanks for sharing your mind through your pen..

..Tony

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Oh..my dear tony so beautiful words .....i really loved your nice piece here.
Thank u so much my dear friend for your sweet review.i adore your mind about nature too.
Be happy my dear poet

Exxiesheartbreak
July 18, 2011

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Nature's Grandeur!

lilly...these writes of your's lately are just breathtaking! Bravo hun! Exxie

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Hi...Thank u so much my dear Caroline for this lovely review.

Exxiesheartbreak
July 21, 2011

You are more than welcome!

micsha
July 18, 2011

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Good

The earth makes love to itself, you being the result. Well written.

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Thank u so much my dear friend for this lovely phrase.
be happy

SanExpeditus
July 18, 2011

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Natural Beauty

Perfect harmony in nature, my dear Lilly, you deliver the subtle power of life through the natural marriage of the elements. I love your depictions, your birth as a rose, rooted to the earth and feeding from the sun, listening to the wind. It's a beautiful refectlection of you, dearest poetess!

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

hi....Thank u so much my lovely San....
you deliver the subtle power of life through the natural marriage of the elements....yes ...i hope hehe
very sweet & romantic view about world & nature.
I adore your heart & mind .
Be happy my lovely San.

SanExpeditus
July 21, 2011

You too, Butterfly Lady!

Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

poet101
July 18, 2011

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Its simply beautiful

Beautful write my friend

. Love poet101

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Thank u so much my dear for your lovely words

shmuelyacobi
July 18, 2011

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Evolution natural!

The poetess described the beauty of birthing process. The comparison is good to superb. If she can bring the ideas down to earth, she would become the best poet. God saw it was good when he made vegetation. It is beccuase of his creative word that everything came into existence. The everlasting process is God's gift.

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Lillylilly
July 21, 2011
(Creator)

Hi....very very beautiful & nice review...i loved your view & thank u so much for your nice point.
very good view and mind about nature ^^
be happy my dear poet.