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A Poem by Lillylilly

Author: Lillylilly
Created: July 18, 2011 at 05:45 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.45 Stars by 10 users with 11 comments and 318 views

The nature‘s intercourse  



……….….When sky cuddles the earth
…….And sheds love drops in it‘s pure holes
……....To the loveliest music of the clouds
………………...I will born as rose
.…..And the fruit of the nature‘s intercourse


L.K /Lilly.2011-07-18
© 2011



Last Modified: June 29, 2013 at 11:57 pm
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soulpoem
August 24, 2011
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Amazing
I will have to give you a kiss for this wonderfully exotic piece dear Lily. I love to write poems on nature but the boldness and simplicity you have shown here is unreachable. Your thoughts and imaginations are superb. Loved this short yet deeply touching piece.



(Author)
Thank u so much for your kiss & your charming words...
Happy u liked this one too be happy my dear always

 Lillylilly replied on August 26, 2011




Vashthestampede0
July 23, 2011
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:-D
pure beauty :-D

Regards
Vash T.S



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear vash...

 Lillylilly replied on July 26, 2011




cjaymac
July 21, 2011
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Perfect poetry
The poetic mind at its best! Astounded by the sheer beauty of this, Lilly! A poetry gem! God Bless, CJ.



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear poet for your sweet review..

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011




lalipenz
July 21, 2011
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5 & super
Dear Lilly it seems you have forgotten me I am guilty here too but can't help just too much work
this is a brilliant poem from a poet coming off age super job spotlight



Correction :
I will be born a rose

 lalipenz replied on July 21, 2011


(Author)
hi...i never forget u ...hehe are u sad in this review for what?1
I love u my dear poet & adore your pen & your personality always.
be happy my dear Lali..your lilly and Fan:d

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011


thank you that was reassuring ... but to see you in another man's arms oh ... how that hurts ha ha ha he he he hahaha I can't stop laughing

 lalipenz replied on July 25, 2011




Richieluv
July 19, 2011
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I love it.
Its simply told.



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear friend

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011




kntinaz
July 19, 2011
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That which was dry brown
now becomith greener
that which was within the ground
now the sights for a dreamer

So very good Lilly, I love your perspective of our mother nature and I adore the way you have written of her...Thanks for sharing your mind through your pen....Tony



(Author)
Oh..my dear tony so beautiful words .....i really loved your nice piece here.
Thank u so much my dear friend for your sweet review.i adore your mind about nature too.
Be happy my dear poet

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011




Exxiesheartbreak
July 18, 2011
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Nature's Grandeur!
lilly...these writes of your's lately are just breathtaking! Bravo hun! Exxie



(Author)
Hi...Thank u so much my dear Caroline for this lovely review.

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011


You are more than welcome!

 Exxiesheartbreak replied on July 21, 2011




micsha
July 18, 2011
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Good
The earth makes love to itself, you being the result. Well written.



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear friend for this lovely phrase.
be happy

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011




SanExpeditus
July 18, 2011
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Natural Beauty
Perfect harmony in nature, my dear Lilly, you deliver the subtle power of life through the natural marriage of the elements. I love your depictions, your birth as a rose, rooted to the earth and feeding from the sun, listening to the wind. It's a beautiful refectlection of you, dearest poetess!



(Author)
hi....Thank u so much my lovely San....
you deliver the subtle power of life through the natural marriage of the elements....yes ...i hope hehe
very sweet & romantic view about world & nature.
I adore your heart & mind .
Be happy my lovely San.

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011


You too, Butterfly Lady!

 SanExpeditus replied on July 21, 2011


(Author)

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011




poet101
July 18, 2011
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Its simply beautiful
Beautful write my friend . Love poet101



(Author)
Thank u so much my dear for your lovely words

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011




shmuelyacobi
July 18, 2011
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Evolution natural!
The poetess described the beauty of birthing process. The comparison is good to superb. If she can bring the ideas down to earth, she would become the best poet. God saw it was good when he made vegetation. It is beccuase of his creative word that everything came into existence. The everlasting process is God's gift.



(Author)
Hi....very very beautiful & nice review...i loved your view & thank u so much for your nice point.
very good view and mind about nature ^^
be happy my dear poet.

 Lillylilly replied on July 21, 2011






      

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