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Author: paSSionsburn

Created: July 14, 2011 at 06:13 pm

Entry Type: Haiku, G (All)

Category: Haiku | Haiku | Nature

Entry Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments 162 views

Miniature Beauty

Tiny and yellow,
Little flower all alone,
You are so lovely.

Author Notes

I saw a litle flower all alone and it was so pretty, so I wrote this for the flower.

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Archia
August 30, 2012

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This really captures the beauty of a single flower. There's always something pretty about just one flower by itself, it stands out so much more. Great haiku.

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paSSionsburn
August 30, 2012
(Creator)

Thnk you so much, C

Astrocrat
April 12, 2012

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pretty:)

I often like short and clear eye catching things like this.
As eye catching as the flower that inspired it

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elphie
April 08, 2012

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Cute and sweet.

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lalipenz
March 05, 2012

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Nice haiku indeed well done

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paSSionsburn
March 05, 2012
(Creator)

Thank you dear!

karm33
February 16, 2012

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this is great i love it

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DewmanX4
July 14, 2011

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Well Done

The way u can say so MUCH in such LITTLE words it is Incredible...

Thanks so much for that great picture in my mind as I so need it right now..

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paSSionsburn
July 15, 2011
(Creator)

Thank you so much my dear friend and I am glad this cheered your heart! BW

SheWolfNLust
July 14, 2011

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awe the flower sounds so beautiful as your poem is, of which I've enjoyed reading, I have always amired Haiku and how much can be said in these few words is a total amazement, your poem has left me with the most beauiiful images and I will have to read more by you, I was so pleasured by your each and every word, thanks ever so kindly for sharing, your poem was breathtaking and evern so exquisite, xoxo

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paSSionsburn
July 15, 2011
(Creator)

You are so sweet thank u for these kind words..BW