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A Haiku by Caroline


Author: Caroline
Created: July 14, 2011 at 06:13 pm
Upload Type: Haiku, G (All)  
Category: Haiku | Haiku | Nature
Upload Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments and 208 views

Miniature Beauty  



Tiny and yellow,
Little flower all alone,
You are so lovely.


© Caroline - all rights reserved

Author Notes


I saw a litle flower all alone and it was so pretty, so I wrote this for the flower.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



Archia
August 30, 2012
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This really captures the beauty of a single flower. There's always something pretty about just one flower by itself, it stands out so much more. Great haiku.



(Author)
Thnk you so much, C

 Caroline replied on August 30, 2012




Astrocrat
April 12, 2012
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pretty:)
I often like short and clear eye catching things like this.
As eye catching as the flower that inspired it


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elphie
April 08, 2012
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Cute and sweet.


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lalipenz
March 05, 2012
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5
Nice haiku indeed well done



(Author)
Thank you dear!

 Caroline replied on March 05, 2012




karm33
February 16, 2012
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this is great i love it


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DewmanX4
July 14, 2011
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Well Done
The way u can say so MUCH in such LITTLE words it is Incredible...

Thanks so much for that great picture in my mind as I so need it right now..



(Author)
Thank you so much my dear friend and I am glad this cheered your heart! BW

 Caroline replied on July 15, 2011




SheWolfNLust
July 14, 2011
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awe the flower sounds so beautiful as your poem is, of which I've enjoyed reading, I have always amired Haiku and how much can be said in these few words is a total amazement, your poem has left me with the most beauiiful images and I will have to read more by you, I was so pleasured by your each and every word, thanks ever so kindly for sharing, your poem was breathtaking and evern so exquisite, xoxo



(Author)
You are so sweet thank u for these kind words..BW

 Caroline replied on July 15, 2011



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