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Miniature Beauty


Author: Caroline
Created: July 14, 2011 at 06:13 pm
Entry Type: Haiku, G (All)
Category: Haiku | Haiku | Nature
Entry Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments 195 views

Miniature Beauty 


Tiny and yellow,
Little flower all alone,
You are so lovely.


Author Notes
I saw a litle flower all alone and it was so pretty, so I wrote this for the flower.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

Archia
August 30, 2012

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This really captures the beauty of a single flower. There's always something pretty about just one flower by itself, it stands out so much more. Great haiku.


Caroline
August 30, 2012
(Creator)
Thnk you so much, C



Astrocrat
April 12, 2012

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pretty:)
I often like short and clear eye catching things like this.
As eye catching as the flower that inspired it

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elphie
April 08, 2012

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Cute and sweet.

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lalipenz
March 05, 2012

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5
Nice haiku indeed well done


Caroline
March 05, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you dear!



karm33
February 16, 2012

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this is great i love it

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DewmanX4
July 14, 2011

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Well Done
The way u can say so MUCH in such LITTLE words it is Incredible...

Thanks so much for that great picture in my mind as I so need it right now..


Caroline
July 15, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you so much my dear friend and I am glad this cheered your heart! BW



SheWolfNLust
July 14, 2011

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awe the flower sounds so beautiful as your poem is, of which I've enjoyed reading, I have always amired Haiku and how much can be said in these few words is a total amazement, your poem has left me with the most beauiiful images and I will have to read more by you, I was so pleasured by your each and every word, thanks ever so kindly for sharing, your poem was breathtaking and evern so exquisite, xoxo


Caroline
July 15, 2011
(Creator)
You are so sweet thank u for these kind words..BW




      

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