In The Moonlight


Author:   Caroline
Created: May 24, 2011 at 01:09 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Romance | Love | Romance
Entry Stats: 4.96 Stars by 15 users with 17 comments 473 views

In The Moonlight 
Love me amidst the baskets of blooming hibiscus.
Sing melodies to me with lyrical charms.
Fulfill my deepest of wishes.
Bathe me in the sensuality of your arms.

Cradle me tight under blankets of rapture.
Shimmers of gold under your feet.
Like a rose's essence my heart you have captured.
Tonight by moonlight we shall meet.

Moon dust dances around your sweet face.
Your green eyes reflect the stars.
Your strong hands you place around my waist.
My love we shall never part.

Tantalize me with potions
of your poetic verses.
I smell the perfume of our loving devotion.
Your song through my mind disperses.

The moon follows your brilliance
sparkles illuminate your skin.
Your words encrypted into the sky by millions.
To mysterious places my heart you send.

Let's dance under glow of moon's lamp.
While fireflies serve as our candles.
Upon my soul is your love stamped.
With eloquent grace our love you handle.






Author Notes
I wrote this piece i hopes of capturing pure...sweet and exquisite romance. What could be more glorious than beng inside the arms of the one whom you love undereath te moon and stars while being intoxicated by the perfume o fresh flowers, and by the loving verses of your sweetheart? Thank you for stopping by to read. your friend, BW44

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Comments & Reviews ( X 34)

stephen_werdna18
May 29, 2011

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Exquisite indeed!
I loved the lyrical quality of this piece. The sweetness of the details that you portrayed here overflowed and it sent out moments of pure bliss and romance. Your choice of words indeed captured the sense of true love and the even flow and rhythm only brought this piece to life. Well done! It deserves it's place in the spotlight


Caroline
May 29, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you so very much Stepehn. I appreciate your lovely review so much. Your friend, BW


Caroline
May 29, 2011
(Creator)
*Stephen



kntinaz
May 29, 2011

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There you go again...My mind enraptured such an awesome conveyance of feelling so our head is filled the imagery of a moonlit night and a lifting of ones heart. Enjoyed throughout. A very great write and a spotlight. Keep that ink of your flowing. Your friend and fan, Tony


Caroline
May 29, 2011
(Creator)
awwww Thank you tony..I absolutely love and appreciate your kind words and reviews, Caroline



windowguy
May 29, 2011

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Superb
Who can read this and not wear a smile?
One of your finest, made me want to read more.


Caroline
May 29, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you my friend...BW



scousa1
May 28, 2011

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hi caroline, well my dear you have really captured the pureness of love . filled full of hope and happiness...great job! yours...joe


Caroline
May 29, 2011
(Creator)
Hi Joe....I thank you for stopping by to read my writes...your fan, caroline



aj_7
May 27, 2011

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Loved it
It's awesome. Very concrete imagery of a very abstract concept; love. you just have a way with words, and your pacing is good I just wasn't sure about the juxtaposition between the 4th and 5th stanzas. Great Job!


Caroline
May 27, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you so very much for the kind words.....BW


aj_7
May 27, 2011
Most welcome



soulpoem
May 27, 2011

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Spotlight
All of your Romance and erotic poems are wonderful. When we are in love then we feel the love with all of our senses. We can taste, feel, see, hear, and smell the love when we are in love. This is very romantic my friend. Are you this romantic as a person too or just in the world of words, wink. haha.


Caroline
May 27, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you soul!! My darling says I am the most passionate woman he has ever known. I assume he is telling me the truth..lol TY again.your friend, Caroline


soulpoem
May 27, 2011
I am Jealous. Maybe I fell behind. He is a lucky son of a Gun. haha. I am sure he is telling you the truth. If a creation can make guys melt then I can only guess what happens when the creator herself is there. Well wishes for you two.


Caroline
May 27, 2011
(Creator)
awwwwwwwwwww TY my dear soul!



jediallday
May 27, 2011

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beautiful
And capture it you have. Something has changed in your writing. You have definitely lifted to a new level (if that were possible). This verse is exquisite in its detail and its beauty. Using the moonlight as a them for romance is a winning formula, but you make this look simple, though it certainly is anything but. Beautiful. SL


Caroline
May 27, 2011
(Creator)
awwwww Jedi...my dear one....you are the sweetest thaaaaaannggg! I thank u doll! C



silverwings
May 27, 2011

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Beautiful write
Hey Caroline...just for usual you had me captivated to the end...ironic isn't it...I write write with such negativity but admire this love and passion with such desire...as usual keep up the great work...Luv Jules...


Caroline
May 27, 2011
(Creator)
Jules...I am honored by your beautiful review.Thank you my dear! BW



JackJericho
May 26, 2011

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A fine write!
"Tantalize me with potions of your poetic verses" - a very nice line and another beautifully written piece; warm and captivating.


Caroline
May 26, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you jack so much for reviewing my poem! I appreciate it so much, BW



SanExpeditus
May 25, 2011

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Enviable Work of Art!
Such a feast for all senses, Caroline, an overwhelming array of beauty and happiness in the arms of living poetry. Your love poems are my daily bread, thank you!
Your devoted fan, San x.


Caroline
May 25, 2011
(Creator)
awwwwww San..you inspire me daily my dear! You are a good friend and I thank you for your gorgeous reviews, Caroline



Dodeydee
May 25, 2011

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Big sigh ~
Ah this is so dreamy and so beautiful BW...gave me a few shivers in the reading.smiles...the imagery is stunning and the flow to your words beautiful..i read it twice..and being an incurable romantic, i will definately read it over again....

Cradle me tight under blankets of rapture. i sooo love this line.....

Bravo my dear friend..How not to spotlight such beauty....smiles...DD.



Caroline
May 25, 2011
(Creator)
Thank you so very much my dear friend DD! BW



andycapped
May 24, 2011

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Oh how you romance the stone on to paper. Excellent piee, dear friend. Fire flies are dancing in my haed. Thanks for sharing, Cc! Ur fan,<3,~Andy


andycapped
May 24, 2011
piece,head, you knowe what I mean, lol.


Caroline
May 25, 2011
(Creator)
rofllll ty my dear friend andykins! C



asensation
May 24, 2011

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Oh you
Oh stop it BW,, you are such a romantic girl , next thing I know you will be saying your love travels across the galaxy on a star dust to discover new planets across the innermost recess of the meta galaxy and just for one kiss you deviated an asteroid from its collision course with earth. I know you BW, so I won't put that past you.


Caroline
May 25, 2011
(Creator)
heeheeeee ty my dear one...BW



Jadore
May 24, 2011

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J'adore!
In The Moonlight... don't shining stars shine at brightest light when moon reflects their lover's glory? does not the sky seem a heaven alone? in need of love red lipstick streak like brush of hummingbird heart and phoenix wing. ~touchable love with golden string thread, unyielding. strong. secure. safe.
~sweet in the bright light, the sunshine, the dark fight - oh how this depicted love excites my own and my soul to the very stars themselves. i want to take trip around maze of galaxies from such beauty in love poem.
Intoxicated In The Moonlight.... oh bookworm, i lose thought train, perfume of intoxication lost me... where was i?


Caroline
May 24, 2011
(Creator)
ahhhhh my dear Jadore...you are so very kind in your review and I just loved what you wrote in your stunning verses here. TY my dear friend...BW



ibuliu
May 24, 2011

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amazing
i'm defineatly a fan, this pieces was exactly that, Romance at its finest please write more
i'm, intoxicated by your written amazing piecw thx 4 sharing bob


Caroline
May 24, 2011
(Creator)
TY dear Bob....you are always so very generous in your reviews. I appreciate your lovely words, BW



Lillylilly
May 24, 2011

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wonderful
My dear Caroline,,,,,,very very beautiful poem with wonderful melody.
well done & bravo my real poet


Caroline
May 24, 2011
(Creator)
Lovely Lilly....I thank you my sweet poetess friend...You are always such an inspiration..Your friend 4 everrrrrr, C



Vashthestampede0
May 24, 2011

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no thanks you
your the one sharing these lovely pieces, :-D seriously i think your love poetry is just WOW!!!! :-D awesome write :-D

Regards
Vash T.S


Caroline
May 24, 2011
(Creator)
Vashtykinsssssssss...You are such a sweety! TY dear friend, BW


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