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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 19, 2005 at 08:37 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 407 views

~Your Quest is Mine As Well~  

My dearest I am learning
To know you through and through
My darling I am yearning
To be the best part of you
Lover I am turning many leaves
One by one, two by two
Its you that my soul needs
Hither to I'll sow the seeds
Of soft words and loving deeds
For my whole heart pounds and bleeds
With lasting vows and sensous creeds
My works do beg, my mouth it pleads
As I reminise on your kiss
By which my flesh feeds
Yes I do go on and on
About how my loves love
Is my only one
I dare not cease or stop in prayer
Lest I turn to find that you're not there
By this I mean to say
That 'there' is the place you were
Till just I last felt you today
My sweet baby there'll be no cure
For the broken self
I would surely suffer
If you could see what I see
Maybe you'd understand
That what I am trying to say
Is above board
No slight of hand
You see, nothing up my sleeve
Just like you
I'm looking out for you and me
For us as one
The grand total of our parts
Being less greater
Than our sum




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Comments & Reviews



drowning_in_you
December 23, 2005
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Your work has always amazed me


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MaryJane
December 21, 2005
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Wow a sure beautiful poem. Love it.


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TempestOfNature
December 19, 2005
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beautiful hey i miss yea and your writing it's been a while good to c your work Ivie


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Katela
December 19, 2005
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A good love poem, great write, Merry Christmas!


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