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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 19, 2005 at 07:51 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 348 views

----FOR ME----  

Eyes blue as the oceans roar~~
All blond as the oceans shore~~
You can't say that you've not heard this before.
This and much like it
Surely makes up your lore!

You are magnificent and more bright
Than the shining sun.
You walk light and breezy,
For you know you are the only one.

You say I am the most beautiful
That your eyes have ever gazed upon~

You can make me feel magnificent
And more bright than the shining sun.
I Walk light and breezy,
For I know I am the only one.

You make me wetter than
The sands of any shore~
You cause me to live and yet~
I am breathless and wanting more.
Or what about this?
~It's you I soooo truely Adore~

For you, I'll be walking, crawling,
Rolling across anywhere~
Making up my future's lore!
For any little morsel
You may have in store~~~
For me.















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Comments & Reviews



RichieRich
February 08, 2006
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Xcellent Write..


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Katela
January 09, 2006
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how romantic, what a beautiful poem, good job!


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drowning_in_you
December 23, 2005
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At times I envy the way your work flows.This is a piece of poetic greatness and I can only wish that I had half the talent that you do


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MaryJane
December 21, 2005
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I really like it. Well said.


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Katela
December 19, 2005
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Very romantic poem, full of love, great write


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