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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 18, 2005 at 11:52 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 402 views

~Masterful Minds~  

~Masterful Minds~

Masterful minds
Have it all over this mind of mine.
I just can't seem to get ahead;
These days,
I'm wondering
I'm wandering
I'm lost in this world of mazes,
Too much heat in frozen dazes.
Can it really be this much?
It just can't cost this much.
I've waivered my fee as it is~I've gone down low
And come up high,
but not enough for that
Pie in the sky.
Rubber tree plant hopes
Ant hopes~
He ain't got the mopes
He's got apple eyes in the skies
And masterful minds
Can be so unkind,
Especially to those of us
Who need to unwind.
It's a gruesome state of affairs
Completely and commonly in awares
Snagged up and shagged up in snares
Of the masterful minds,
So unsinserely bashful I find.
It's rocky on that road
Of dumbstruck~
And you never know if you'll get
Run over by a dumptruck!
Oh, what the f--k am I?
I'm trying to covey~
Just trying to say,
Each and every day~
This IS true love
All the way~

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December 23, 2005
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Nice to see your still with us Ivie

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December 19, 2005
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Liked the ending alot, have a merry christmas

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