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Light into love


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 15, 2011 at 06:14 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Love
Entry Stats: 4.95 Stars by 11 users with 12 comments 258 views

Light into love 
Wind of hope courage of thunder, for I have seen the usual passing moments.

But this time I thunderstorm have seen, the darkness change to light.

Because I am in love baby I am coming home, with a tear in my eyes.

And I said baby I am coming home, baby I am coming home with beautiful life.

When I see our daughter living in a happy life, as I crying to see her first walk.

For I have been lonesome for the years, but anymore I extend my hand.

To my baby girl I love you to death I donít want to loose you because I treat you with

kindness and warmth and Love.



Author Notes
A special piece


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 15)

andrea99
November 16, 2013

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Great Write
very positive poem and the words you used to express the feelings make it so powerful !! Simply awesome

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Celticsoul
January 24, 2012

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Moving
This was heartfelt and earnest, I admire that above all else in a love poem. it seemed very much like a soldier coming back to his lover. This is a work that will stick with me.

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smolderinglove
December 18, 2011

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Beautiful
I love the truth and heart of your words. Very special indeed.

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lovestory1
September 11, 2011

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Aw this is so beautiful and sweet, keep up the great work.

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arminemanukyan
June 03, 2011

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it truly sounds very special, its really good, i can even feel the feelings you put in the poem, feelings are what makes a poem good. so than you, again

best wishes Armine

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kntinaz
April 16, 2011

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Bravo what a rendering of emotion. Your writes drips with the love that you have for the little one. One can feel the smiles and tears of joy which will be with you for many moons to come...Thanks for sharing...Tony

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elfqueena
April 16, 2011

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awe this makes my heart so happy for you sweet son, I am so glad you have someone to love like this, just to awesome for words, i am so happy for you , I am filled with joy from reading this , and for you it does me good love you my poetic son, and love who you love also , because they have made you happy . and I agree with the others I think love has made your writing so much better, its awesome and one of my favorites of yours . beautifully written sweetheart!

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Caroline
April 16, 2011

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Exquisite
This is absolutely beautiful Thunderstorm.I loved reading it.Bravo! BW44

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xcarebearx
April 15, 2011

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Amazing!
this is rly good m8, got a really nice feeling when reading this one so thank you, and u definently have my SL vote ur awesome!

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TaylorSwiftFan22
April 15, 2011

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Heart Warming
This was such a fantstic poem. The emotion and thought you put in this poem is very evident. Even though this is personal to you, i think quite a lot of people will be able to relat to this.

I just thinnk that the rhythm is thrown off towards the end. Maybe shortening the lines will make a new rhythm, and keep every line in pace.

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DansOnly
April 15, 2011

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Wonderful
This has to be the best piece I've read of your's Thunder. It incites emotion and has nearly a lyrical feel. Your use of structure and punctuation both compliment and enhance the read. Absolutely a pleasure to read. SL

Just my thoughts
Dans

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blackroseislove
April 15, 2011

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Aww good poem thunder! Its awesome! Love it

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