Bravo what a rendering of emotion. Your writes drips with the love that you have for the little one. One can feel the smiles and tears of joy which will be with you for many moons to come...Thanks for sharing...Tony
awe this makes my heart so happy for you sweet son, I am so glad you have someone to love like this, just to awesome for words, i am so happy for you , I am filled with joy from reading this , and for you it does me good love you my poetic son, and love who you love also , because they have made you happy . and I agree with the others I think love has made your writing so much better, its awesome and one of my favorites of yours . beautifully written sweetheart!
This has to be the best piece I've read of your's Thunder. It incites emotion and has nearly a lyrical feel. Your use of structure and punctuation both compliment and enhance the read. Absolutely a pleasure to read. SL