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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: April 03, 2011 at 09:18 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 6 users with 7 comments and 362 views

I'll Stay Dry  

if I don't smile,
the sun won't shine,
so you stay gone,
and I'll stay dry,

if I'm not sad,
the clouds won't cry,
so you stay gone,
and I'll stay dry,

so you don't have to ask me,
how I feel inside,
you can take a look and tell me,
what the weathers like,



© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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DeviantWriter88
April 09, 2011
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Yes, sometimes it just seems so like this, wondering and wishing that a sign reaches out to the one without us saying them anything or even hinting. If they could somehow sense us through some other force without us making them feel.

You have done exactly that in a very perfect way. Nature indeed speaks for us sometimes and it is simply beautiful the way you have put it.

Thank you for sharing


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callie86
April 06, 2011
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Beautiful
I can't stop reading it over and over. Absolutely beautiful...


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Caroline
April 05, 2011
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Spotlight for sure!
I found this in the spotlight, and I can see why! This is simply amazing and so profound. Very nice job, BW44


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OhdarlingIwis
April 03, 2011
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Likeed it! :)
This is amazing! I really thought it was beautiful. Great write.
Keep writing dear friend.


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Writergirl36
April 03, 2011
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Love the title!
I love this poem until the end--but love the title.


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patrickmurray
April 03, 2011
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Kool
I liked the native American. style you used with it.Realistic and well worded.Loved it keep writing want to hear more.


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DearHarlot
April 03, 2011
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This is so deep and thought-provoking. I really enjoyed it.


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