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Fusion poem 2


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 15, 2011 at 05:07 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Fantasy | Love | Inspirational
Entry Stats: 4.87 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 180 views

Fusion poem 2 
I see my heart burning brightly It glows like a phoenix rose from the ashes,the rose is so brightly Red Hello my friend we meet again, it has been a while has in it warrior.


In your eyes I see beauty all that is wonderful in this world, All I ever wanted and prayed for in a girl In your eyes I see the ocean.such peace you bring to the sea I see warm waters in your heart you seem to have that effect on me In your eyes I see the sky.

my heart soars for you have touched something deep inside that reaches down to my soul, you become my smile a permanent fixture on my face you have drawn me out of the darkness andbecome the rainbow in my sky your smile melts the snow and your voice.

As the sun settles end of the year of Majestic with his dark beauty full of the moon reveals the hope of prodigy.

My heart has been shackled with chains, also with a lock. My lock combination is simple as my poetry, to unlock my heart.

Shackle my legs like a dangerous bond between the immortality, I have for seen the pain and the anger inside of the futile.


Author Notes
Another Brilliant fusion poem from the king of the tributes


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

Shadowspast
March 18, 2011

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It's dark and rhythmic to the point of almost being hypnotic. really love it. I feel like i should hear a drum beating to the sound of it... could just be me, i dont know. Love the emotion put into it, love the flow, its great! keep writing!

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stephen_werdna18
March 15, 2011

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Good poem. I love your choice of words and the expressiveness of this poem. Full of passion and honest emotion. I commend you for writing your heart on your sleeve. Well done

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LowShoulder
March 15, 2011

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The images you create are wonderful and the overall feel of the poem is quite pleasant. Very good.

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heav1234
March 15, 2011

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WOW
Okay you were right this is Brilliant i love the first Lines and the last lines so beautiful. Wow This fusion is one heck of an illusion i just wanted that to rhyme. Lol thanks for sharing. King Tribute man.

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MusicMyLife
March 15, 2011

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This is amazingly written...

I see my heart burning brightly It glows like a phoenix rose from the ashes,the rose is so brightly Red Hello my friend we meet again, it has been a while has in it warrior.


In your eyes I see beauty all that is wonderful in this world, All I ever wanted and prayed for in a girl In your eyes I see the ocean.such peace you bring to the sea I see warm waters in your heart you seem to have that effect on me In your eyes I see the sky.

my heart soars for you have touched something deep inside that reaches down to my soul, you become my smile a permanent fixture on my face you have drawn me out of the darkness andbecome the rainbow in my sky your smile melts the snow and your voice.

Loved these lines...

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