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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 13, 2011 at 03:49 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Inspirational
Upload Stats: 4.87 Stars by 8 users with 8 comments and 247 views

Fusion poem  

with my last breath I will breathe your name You're my hero even in death, In a need of an angel you came in the dark skies of the midnight.
We're old souls in new life baby they gave us a new life, and learn Some time to touch old friends and still return for my sweet angel I would die. I'd pick the stars from the sky.
In times of darkness In times of war The warriors will ride like never before, In search to Conquer The unholy night The Sound of thunder.as the waters flow from the rivers to the sea continusoly shaping.

As the barbed wire pierce my skin I have been thinking is this for pain or something else, Have to race my soul Your heart is your love, your love is your family your family is your future your future is your destiny your destiny is your Ambiton,Your love is your true destiny.
Hear Me I am a Storm full of Rain.

Thunder sound like a WarDrum.

Lighting is A Shocking Experince.

Around, all around, the shadows gather.


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


This is a idea i had from my past poems


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 7)



Shadowspast
March 18, 2011
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Beautiful
The flow is wonderful. Really loved the emotion put into this piece. Love is an unconditional thing that is hard to understand, and destiny is a mystery. Thank you for sharing this! really loved it


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stephen_werdna18
March 15, 2011
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This is a pretty well expressed piece with a lot of vivid images. I felt the passion that you wanted to convey, and your expressive use of words added good depth and texture to this piece. Good work


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blossomwriter
March 14, 2011
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So Beautiful!
I love your depth of irony, your heart is like an unsinkable ship, I love your poem! Fusion is such a good title!


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elfqueena
March 14, 2011
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Thunderson, you amazed me with this one, its awesome sweetie simply awesome, you have written a very very good poem, I loved this, its my favorite of your writings , no wonder its in the spotlight, good work sweetie love it cant get it out of my head it was such a good read dearling,. you out did yourself this time, thumbs up


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Caroline
March 13, 2011
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Nice work!
Ahhh Thunderstorm this is just beautifully penned. bravo my dear! BW44


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Kassandra
March 13, 2011
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Conviction packed
I just know you believe in your subject and this shines through so well in this piece. I'm very impressed with this write from you my poetic bro. You have taken on so many different aspects of poetry in recent months and this growth is simply super Storm.
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us
Yours Kassie


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DeviantWriter88
March 13, 2011
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Really Good!!
Brother this is superb how you connected and related to friendship and relationship I really loved reading


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heav1234
March 13, 2011
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Wonderful
Though you probably don't want to hear this from me. This was prettyful and it seemed detailed which was good and imagery i guess is where you were going. great job. thanks for sharing.


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