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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: March 02, 2011 at 03:06 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 220 views

Woods  

I've been stumbling through these woods,
in circles so it seems,
and everywhere I look,
all I see is trees,
I've been trying to remember,
if there ever was a time,
I wasn't lost inside the timbers,
have I ever been outside,
am I the only one that's in here,
am I the only one alive,
how long will this continue,
will I wander till I die,
as I walk around in circles,
sometimes I wonder if its me,
am I the one that did this,
am I the one that plants the seeds,







© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



tears598
March 02, 2011
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awesome job! ... emphasizes being lost and worried about not being able to find the exit . often a feeling many have felt im sure.


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sweetgeorgia
March 02, 2011
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nice write


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EltonCamp
March 02, 2011
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I am impressed with your poem. It is well written and thought -provoking. Thank you very much for sharing it with us today. Elton


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