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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: February 20, 2011 at 06:13 pm
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Sad | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 254 views

I shouldn't have to  

Mother I love you,
but I hate the beast within you,
Mother I love you,
can't you tame the beast within you,

Hide in a shadow in my corner,
hoping the beast don't see me,
wish I could talk to my mother,
but the beast won't let her free,
I seen you take them pills they gave you,
i guess they don't work worth a shit,
but when you take them by the bottle,
what the fuck did you think you would get,
I just cant take this shit anymore,
but I don't want to leave you again,
so mother I am begging you,
get rid of the beast within,

Mother I love you,
but I hate the beast within you,
Mother I love you,
I really don't want to leave you,

I will cry away the days,
lying in my room,
I think that I have gone crazy,
if not I will be soon,
I can't stand to see you slit your wrist,
so please will you listen to me,
I know that you can't help what you do,
but I shouldn't have to watch you bleed.

Mother I love you,
but I hate the beast within you,
Mother I love you,
I'll come and see you soon.


© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



lalipenz
February 21, 2011
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5
Mother please listen to your son you mean the world to him and I like this poem


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Whiskurz
February 20, 2011
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Wow!!!!!!
This is Powerfully Sad.....Great Write.......Whiskurz


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Shadowangel21
February 20, 2011
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it's tough to try and love someone who is ruining themselves, but just being there for them is one way closer to recovering, even though it's hard and often hurts, but trying to reach out to them helps, it also helps to let them know they're not alone. I hope your mother gets through this and you guys reconcile soon, keep speaking out!


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veronicagibson
February 20, 2011
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this was amazingly powerful... my heart aches from reading this.


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