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Fire in my light

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 19, 2011 at 07:02 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Love | Dark
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 113 views
Fire in my light 
Let me start a fire, in your eyes.

will i ever find the answer , to seek the answer i want to see the fire.

burning brightly in my heart,to see the fuel and the passion.

I have lost the battle with my testament, as long i breathe in.

I care for my poet friends and my family, to seek out the misgiving.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

elfqueena
February 19, 2011

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perfect!!!
awesome, p.son, this was your best one yet . beautifully written and so sweet loved it simply loved it sweetie. you did such a good job on this one, fowed so good and the words awesome,loved it
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DeviantWriter88
February 19, 2011

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Beautiful!
I can feel the emotions flowing in this poem which says so much in so less words. It makes it more beautiful and brings a content to my heart. You my brother are a wonderful person.

Keep writing with such passion and thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem.
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AmazingAdara
February 19, 2011

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i love it(: its amazing(:
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