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A Poem by PaleWind

Author: PaleWind
Created: February 18, 2011 at 08:23 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 216 views

Feels as though  

It feels as though the night sky,
has been stripped of all its stars,
nothing left to reach for,
my dreams I must discard,

and it feels as though the flame that,
once flickered in my soul,
is growing ever fainter,
as it leaves me ever cold,

and it feels as though the feathers,
have fallen off my wings,
nothing left to treasure,
the sweet has left my dreams,

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February 18, 2011
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This poem is very sad but written very well. I can feel your pain through your words. I have often felt the same.

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