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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: February 18, 2011 at 03:47 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 220 views

Words of Comfort  

Needing words of comfort,
finding none to hear,
waiting for your voice,
to find my open ears,

i need your arms to hold me,
my arms need you to hold,
waiting for your body,
waiting for your soul,

the moment passes quickly,
too quick to hold it dear,
i would have held it tighter,
but its hard when your not here,

I hope your out there waiting,
really there for me to find,
i hope that day is coming,
the day our lives get intertwined,


© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



mystory
February 18, 2011
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Excellent
I enjoyed reading your excellent poem. Filling each verse with emotion. Excellent work.


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lalipenz
February 18, 2011
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5
I like this for the intent you kept it straight from the heart good


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patricia_bisset
February 18, 2011
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gorgeous writing right there. LUV IT!



Not sure how to "spotlight" the ones Iike so much... just signed up to this site... but i would have for this one had I known!

 patricia_bisset replied on February 18, 2011






      

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