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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: February 17, 2011 at 11:02 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 223 views

I'll really leave  

when i leave this place I'll really leave,
i think its best i don't tell you why,

you're gonna jump the cliff you'd better learn to fly,

when i leave this place I'll really leave,
but I'll leave my words behind,

better learn to swim, before you learn to dive,

when i leave this place I'll really leave,
I think enough will do just fine,

gonna grab the ladder, better learn to climb,

when i leave this place I'll really leave,
I don't need what isn't mine,

when i leave this place, me and my god die.


© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



GenivaPhortil
February 18, 2011
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It has a really good flow from stanza to stanza. Good poem.


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sweetgeorgia
February 17, 2011
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Nice work


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