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A Poem by PaleWind



Author: PaleWind
Created: February 16, 2011 at 02:40 am
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 185 views

Eat Your Magic  

Welcome to my wonderland,
see colors never known before,
lose your fears and take my hand,
ill lead you through my door,

slip away into your mind,
joy and laughter is all you'll feel,
a shelter from the world outside,
doubt everything you thought was real,

eat your magic mushroom gone,
endless worlds we will explore,
come with me and we'll have fun,
reality will be no more.


© PaleWind - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



SecretDrew
February 18, 2011
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Really enjoyed this. Had my head spinning in colours. Keep up the good work


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Lillylilly
February 16, 2011
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5~
Beautiful imagination.
Full of unknown space ~
Bravo i enjoyed


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gnrdakota
February 16, 2011
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I love the image your poem conveys its really f'in cool.


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