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Thunderstorm and stephen_werdna 18 Ice bottle

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 15, 2011 at 08:53 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Spiritual | Sad | Friendship
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 168 views
Thunderstorm and stephen_werdna 18 Ice bottle 
Teardrop by Teardrop hoping of forgotten souls, Wishing and wanting to be made wholeAll have been sealed away in a bottle.

Forgotten hearts, forgotten battles,No time like the Forgotten Soul of the tears of the Familes who has lost their forgotten ones.

All the deaths of their beloved daughters and their beloved sons,they have scarificed Their badges of honor and their medals to bring Home this Victory of honor rejoice and Hope.

But their lives were cut short while they were on the edge hanging by a rope,Stranded by their pride and their lusting heart .

They met the end but can no longer start,They bleed and sweat cried out for the hallows grave.

Hoping for their lost souls to be saved,to Express The enteral Flame will show which path to go you pick 2 paths 1 path to Heaven or the other path straight to the fiery death .


That's why you need to savor and enjoy each and every breath,Before you ever see the light enjoy the last very moments of your life.

Don't get caught up in the suffering and the strife,To reach your last inch breath of life Dig a shallow grave.

Achieve your dreams and follow that paths you've paved,then maybe once you have achieve don't choose Death stare at death in the eye.

Choose the hellos and not the goodbyes,


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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)

elfqueena
November 25, 2011

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you out did yourself again sweet one I loved veryline of it . was so good and wonderful the way you wrote it was such blessing to read you outdid your self
you grown so much in the past year I am so proud of you and wish you the best of luck with what ever you do your My thunderstorm you will always be my son love you ..
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NatureBoy
February 18, 2011

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remarable
remarkable and beautiful collaboration you 2 did, it was very good.
every line was better than the next, even though they are all the best.
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heav1234
February 15, 2011

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Beautiful just Beautiful
This is wonderful TS and Stephen this is really truly great. It really is sad and this is like an inspiration. I would never want to have to look death in the eye unless ya know somethin happens and things. Ok i'm kinda speechless i really don't know what to say. Except it's brilliant. You guys made a Masterpiece. I'm so SPOTLIGHTING this. thanks for sharing.
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