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My Surreal Love



Author: MagicMJ
Created: February 06, 2011 at 01:19 am
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Lyrics | Love | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 135 views

My Surreal Love 
Another midnight blues is calling
The sun is fading and I am falling
Into the darkness, my eyes are crying
Emotions burning and I am dying

Please hold me now, I need you here
My mind is wondering make it clear
My body is shaking make it still
Just touch me now make me feel

Moonlit glows through my face
Teardrops sparkle with grace
Flashing gloriously in my eyes
So beautiful, sadness shines

So take me now to where you are
It might be hell but I don't care
By your side I will find refuge
Release my soul from my cage

Just touch me gently
Whisper to me softly
Touch my heart deeply
My surreal love...

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Comments & Reviews

stephen_werdna18
February 14, 2011

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this is a very vulnerable piece Ate MJ. It speaks of you longing for that person to be with you, that he becomes part of your life.. and you share your life and love for a very long time. Great rhythm and they're good.. I wish there was a tune that accompanied this

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Kassandra
February 13, 2011

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Yearning
The sadness of your loss and your wish to be gone from your solitude to be with the one you care about. So sad and so beautifully written and so desperately needing to be in the same place as them even hell as you intimated. Really good stuff
Dark and beautiful
Yours Kassie

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Lillylilly
February 06, 2011

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Soft^^
I loved your poem~
Full of pure love~
positive words
Bravo my dear~

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