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A Poem by MichelleR



Author: MichelleR
Created: January 16, 2011 at 11:54 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Sad | Love
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 121 views

with out you  

The pain inside my stomach, hiding
The butterfly's have gone to sleep
The feeling of your presence still subsiding
and soon my mind will be at peace

The numbness i feel inside my body
Can only be fixed by the presences of you
My vision and my mind are groggy
I open my eyes to thoughts of you

My heart is fluttering with excitement
Like i train about to go off course
Its only a matter of time until i see you
and the feelings will hit with full force

With your arms around me
My problems disappear
You are the cure to this life
With you i have nothing to fear


© MichelleR - all rights reserved

Author Notes


to clear up the meaning of the poem . its meant to show a girl going to sleep and then waking up thinking about a guy who she is deeply in love with. so if it doesn't make sense at first READ THIS,


 
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Comments & Reviews



RossEureka
January 17, 2011
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Emotional
I can understand what you mean by that. I'm a "she" too after all.

Beautiful poem by the way.



(Author)
thanks so much !(:

 MichelleR replied on January 17, 2011




Gjones
January 17, 2011
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I feel it.
I feel the emotion and pain in this poem, it is very good and I hope you write more!


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renuroy
January 17, 2011
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Good
Its good to read.. you have mentioned quited a few things which we all connect to.. reminds us of the one we love... keep up the good work.


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