with out you
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Author:
MichelleR
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| Created: January 16, 2011 at 11:54 pm |
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Entry Type:
Poem, G (All)
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| Category: Romance | Sad | Love |
| Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 93 views |
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with out you 
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The pain inside my stomach, hiding
The butterfly's have gone to sleep
The feeling of your presence still subsiding
and soon my mind will be at peace
The numbness i feel inside my body
Can only be fixed by the presences of you
My vision and my mind are groggy
I open my eyes to thoughts of you
My heart is fluttering with excitement
Like i train about to go off course
Its only a matter of time until i see you
and the feelings will hit with full force
With your arms around me
My problems disappear
You are the cure to this life
With you i have nothing to fear
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Author Notes
to clear up the meaning of the poem . its meant to show a girl going to sleep and then waking up thinking about a guy who she is deeply in love with. so if it doesn't make sense at first READ THIS,
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January 17, 2011
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