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Escaping you

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Author: MagicMJ

Created: January 11, 2011 at 03:00 am

Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)

Category: Sad | Love | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 89 views

Escaping you

I've been escaping
In them I try finding
The pleasure and pain
I had when you said,
and when you asked
The words I love you

You're my flawless imperfect
You're my decent asshole
You're my beautiful nightmare
You're my depressed elation
You're my distant soulmate
You're my dimly sparkling star

And I am a stupid girl waiting
For you to welcome me...

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Comments & Reviews

Lillylilly
January 11, 2011

Helpful:

Great ~

Oh ,
And I am a stupid girl waiting
For you to welcome me...
wow ~
your poem is intersting ~

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KeedraSasser
January 11, 2011

Helpful:

love it

thats exactly how i feel about that guy over there (lol)
thanks for the read, keep it up!

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VictoriaRose
January 11, 2011

Helpful:

Wow, i can really relate to this. Good piece

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