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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: December 26, 2010 at 02:54 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Sad | Personal
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 197 views

lost more  

lost more

i dont know where to start.
never been an end
i often beg God to please
stop this pain. sorrow
consuming and unforgiving.
i've been to this point before.
i'm holding on to nothing.
thats a new flavor to demise
untethered and slinging all over
i'm just very small and loveable.
but that cant be true.
do poeple hate the true?
because it is true. please!
you know who you are,
i dont have a clue.
if i was dead in the morning
would it sorrow you?

iviedoe 2010


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Author Notes


its to that point


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



Caroline
April 29, 2012
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Powerful
I am going through some similar stuff now and this spoke to me, BW44


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angelshorizon
December 26, 2010
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this feeling never truly disappears.....to the brim it just spills.....a good one.....



i think you have change the font color for the words are invisible.....

 angelshorizon replied on December 26, 2010




Hawksbrother
December 26, 2010
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Nothing to say.
So I won't.


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