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Death of the Stalker

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Author: MagicMJ

Created: December 25, 2010 at 12:28 am

Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)

Category: Dark | Sad | Weird

Entry Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments 127 views

Death of the Stalker

You're so cute today...
No, you're manly...
I like everything in you
Your depressed state
Your intellectual thought

I can forever read your poems
Forever look at your pictures
But I will never send you messages
I will never bother you with my dramas
I know you have had enough of mess

I feel your depression, your pain
If only I can share my feelings
I would like to get you out of that state
I will only love you no matter what
If you would only accept my love

But today I feel different
It's as if I'll be facing my last day
Hold on I feel something in my chest
Gosh, I'm bleeding... but no cut I feel
Oh too bad I guess I need to stop

Myself already inflicted
The Death of the Stalker in me...

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Comments & Reviews (

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NatureBoy
December 25, 2010

Helpful:

Interesting

You let your emotions pour into this one MJ!
I loved it, I hope you do find courage though to tell the person.
I'm sure they would love it, and be moved by it.
Keep up the great work, don't change a thing.

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 25, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot

XMissHyperborean
December 25, 2010

Helpful:

Disturbing. Provocative..... A little hesitant to even comment. Hope the stalker in you does infact die and does not resurrect.

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 25, 2010
(Creator)

hehehe yah thanks

CaroDreams4u
December 25, 2010

Helpful:

Mysterious

This is very mysterious and full of emotion. I hope whoever this is, reads this. Great job! BW44

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 25, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot!!

stephen_werdna18
December 25, 2010

Helpful:

Good Poem Ate. I hope the person that you're referring to reads this. I'm sure he'll appreciate it.. about you being eager to help him with his problems if only he knew how you feel. This was written with passion and love. Great job

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 25, 2010
(Creator)

thanks bunso...

jessgazeelle
December 25, 2010

Helpful:

hmm..

Well, Ilike the phrasing, and the emotion put into this!
It's wonderful!
Keep writing!

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 25, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot...

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