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Phoenix's Lullaby

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 23, 2010 at 05:38 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Fantasy | Spiritual | Love
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 151 views

Phoenix's Lullaby 
Sleeping in a volcano Waiting to be hatch you cried in happiness

Even I cried in memory tears I weeping a like a newborn baby phoenix

I didnít earn my flames yet but once I turn into a teenager I will start get the flames.

I rise from the fiery depths of the mighty Volcano I shake my flame wings

It feels so awesome to get out to spread my wings I am so happy to listen volcano erupt.

I crack my talons with force I look forward to see the earth and itís glory a beautiful day.

In the flaming hot baking sun I am like a mythical creature a firebird waiting to hunt.

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December 23, 2010

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Such splendid imagery this strikes straight into the very heart of something tangible and real feeling. 'crack my talons' just plain awesome right here man. Good Stuff my poetic brother good to see you posting such beautiful and interesting pieces.
Thank you for sharing
Yours Kassie

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December 23, 2010

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very nice thunder,
very descriptive and great imagery.
i saw this whole thing in my head, i loved it.
u have a style like none other thunder,
keep up the great work!

December 23, 2010
Wait till the main surpise


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