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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 17, 2010 at 08:27 pm
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Collaborations | Collaborations | Inspirational
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 5 comments and 520 views

ThunderStorm and Magic MJ's Vampire Heart  

My heart is cold, a heartbeat it won't give any much blood to see the weaken and the pain.

Like a ship sunk in a sea for a hundred years No life could ever be seen through the windows of my soul.

Escape from the Wrath of my Confronted Soul it beats so furiously it has Gasping for Air No mercy has been bestowed to thy lost soul.

Forever in the darkness and nothingness Soul Of the weak Enteral Soul of The Damned Lurking are pains and miseries of abandonment.

Forever will not see life nor death In the eyes of Vampire it has the Clustering heart of Blood Craving for that warm crimson, to touch the lusting lips.

Take a taste of the sweetness where sins flow in the mind of the Wicked It overpowers the demon inside of your Enteral Organs.

Gnawing every pieces of my inner being savoring the devils that were kept deep within Feels Like A Creature Tasting Your Spinal Cords It Rips The Flesh out of your Bones And your Eye Sockets.

It would left you nothing just your darkened ashes with stains of blood all over your remains Once your Corpse is inside the Coffin You will be Cremated into a Inferno.

Your body will meet hell as you face the blazing fires of down under Where The Devil will Greet you To torture you for your Suffering Delight.

And you will hear cries of pain that will seep in the crevices of your mind hissing a Snake Sticking the mighty Fangs out to Anger the Snake inside of you.

The venom is already flowing through your veins your death will be the death of the hissing snake.

6X6 you will be dead by one strike of a Snake But a bite of you will bring doom to thy devilish serpent.

Because in the abyss of our beings flow the venom called love....

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December 18, 2010
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nicley done dude. i really enjoyed it. keep writing and keep up the good work.

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December 18, 2010
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Wow great piece and was truly amazed by the last part with the venom called love.... It was different and I'm not usually a big fan of the vampires with that said nice piece my friend. Take care.

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December 18, 2010
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Very Nicely Written!
Very nice job to the both of you!

I have always wanted to "Escape from the Wrath of my Confronted Soul".

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December 17, 2010
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Thunder thanks for writing with me...
Hehehe very nice... Its a priviledge...

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December 17, 2010
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You two are amazing . Great Job . Keep on writing . I look forward to reading more from the both of you.

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