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I WISH (For D.D.)

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Author: MagicMJ

Created: December 17, 2010 at 06:09 am

Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)

Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 111 views

I WISH (For D.D.)

I have wandered
Been in love to someone else
Got hurt and bruised
Tried to be happy for a while

But every time I see you
I always end up wishing we are still together
That I am still your stupid girl
That I am still the one you wanted to marry

I wish I am the girl
Whom you still love since you saw her
I wish I am just waiting
That you'll be with me after some years

I just wish you didn't slip
You didn't fall out of love from me
I wish I can say
I love you to your ear...

Last Modified: December 17, 2010 at 06:36 am

Author Notes

I curse the day I let you slip away...

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Comments & Reviews (

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elfqueena
December 17, 2010

Helpful:

awe so sad to lose one you love, but may haps since he went to another girl you were better off then you know , as if he loved you he wouldnt have been looking at another , maybe just maybe you were save more heartache this way , but who knows for sure, you put your self into this can feel the pain,come forth from each word, cooly written , thumbs up

Additional Comments (3)

MagicMJ
December 17, 2010
(Creator)

aww... thanks elfie...

elfqueena
December 17, 2010

your welcomed dear one , merry christmas

MagicMJ
December 17, 2010
(Creator)

merry christmas

quackyquotes
December 17, 2010

Helpful:

My heart ached just reading it! You've written it well

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 17, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot

benjamin006
December 17, 2010

Helpful:

Very Sad Indeed

Man, you really missed him, huh?

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
December 17, 2010
(Creator)

thanks

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