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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: December 17, 2010 at 06:09 am
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 123 views

I WISH (For D.D.)  

I have wandered
Been in love to someone else
Got hurt and bruised
Tried to be happy for a while

But every time I see you
I always end up wishing we are still together
That I am still your stupid girl
That I am still the one you wanted to marry

I wish I am the girl
Whom you still love since you saw her
I wish I am just waiting
That you'll be with me after some years

I just wish you didn't slip
You didn't fall out of love from me
I wish I can say
I love you to your ear...


Last Modified: December 17, 2010 at 06:36 am
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Author Notes


I curse the day I let you slip away...


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



elfqueena
December 17, 2010
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awe so sad to lose one you love, but may haps since he went to another girl you were better off then you know , as if he loved you he wouldnt have been looking at another , maybe just maybe you were save more heartache this way , but who knows for sure, you put your self into this can feel the pain,come forth from each word, cooly written , thumbs up



(Author)
aww... thanks elfie...

 MagicMJ replied on December 17, 2010


your welcomed dear one , merry christmas

 elfqueena replied on December 17, 2010


(Author)
merry christmas

 MagicMJ replied on December 17, 2010




quackyquotes
December 17, 2010
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My heart ached just reading it! You've written it well



(Author)
thanks a lot

 MagicMJ replied on December 17, 2010




benjamin006
December 17, 2010
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Very Sad Indeed
Man, you really missed him, huh?



(Author)
thanks

 MagicMJ replied on December 17, 2010






      

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