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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 10, 2010 at 08:57 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Horror | Dark | Death
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 233 views

Shadowy of death  

The nightmare begins with a vengeance in its evil eye I am in a deep trance of pain.

And torture it is been delivered with a painful prices it to be in debt or seeing me in agony or suffering.

I see the world surrounding by pitch black my unfortunate past it has come back to haunt me.

My shadows of a shadowy death it is begin to show no mercy and no remorse the soul it collapses of agonized defeat.

It clawed is way into the planet earth is like a demon gasping at your lungs looking for your dead body.

Then you see your corpse in a coffin seeing people cry over your remains and wishing you will come back.

But you canít not beat death in the eye because he will take your soul by touching you.

It has to haunt your memories it shows your most painful death either in heaven or hell.

You let fate decide.

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

January 14, 2011
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Tremendously well written
...."unfortunate past it has come back to haunt me' wonderful wording. I love this it has vivid imagery and one feels it intoxicating him.

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December 12, 2010
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While the poem is dark, the imagery is amazing. Keep writing . I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

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