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Somebody's Nobody



Author: MagicMJ
Created: December 07, 2010 at 04:29 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 148 views

Somebody's Nobody 
Like a shooting star you are falling
And someone out there is waiting
To make a wish upon your sparkle
Of happiness, of love for someone
But pity you will never be the one

Like a last penny in his pocket
He took you out, held you in his hand
To let go of you for a single desire
Dumped you in a wishing well
For him to have his dream girl

Coz you are just somebody's nobody
Someone owns you but you're nothing
You're there but invisible to his eyes
He touches you but he's really numb
He can't feel you, not even your agony

So you just silently weep there
In the corner of your world
Coz you're somebody's nobody
No one will cry as you crumble
As you face your own doom
Coz you're somebody's nobody

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Comments & Reviews

jlmrocks
January 01, 2011

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love it
so true................i can relate,i love it

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stephen_werdna18
December 13, 2010

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Aww.. this was such a sad poem Ate. But you were really able to capture the emotion of someone who is being neglected really well. The flow is great and your choice of words is simple but unique. Well done Ate MJ!

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dazedforever
December 09, 2010

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Wow
This was an extremely emotional and powerful piece! I just loved the title, and you did an excellent job expanding upon it in the form of such a sad story. It could make a really good song too. It read and flowed wonderfully. A very well crafted piece as usual, I loved it MJ, keep on writing my talented friend!!!

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