A Poem by ThunderStorm

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Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 05, 2010 at 05:19 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Free Verse | Love | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 176 views

My thunder flower

It blossoms in the night time sky

It absorbs thunder and lighting

To soak in the precious rain

It consumes like a water lily

The thunder flower only opens if there is a thunderstorm

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

Caroline
December 05, 2010
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wow!!

This is deep ThunderStorm!! I really like it so much. I can just picture this flower you speak of! great write! bookworm

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NatureBoy
December 05, 2010
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I like this one thunder, like caitlyn below said, short and sweet.
Good writing thunder. keep it up!

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CaitlynL97
December 05, 2010
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Short and sweet. Nicely done. Well use of words. Keep writing. I re read this four times before i decided to comment.

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