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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: December 05, 2010 at 10:43 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Horror | Sad | Dark
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 252 views

Ice heart  

Ice heart

My heart is been frozen solid from huge blocks of ice.

It is cold for my heart it canít feel the beat of the presence.

The temperature inside of my heart is Ė5 degrees bitter cold.

As I down for the count my heart is still freezing badly.

But then I heard a flame slowly candlelit flame appeared in the shadows.

Suddenly the temperature was 50 degrees.

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December 05, 2010
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It was good. I feel it could've flowed a little better. Other than that it was great. KEep writing.

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December 05, 2010
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Aim high
Aim high beomce complete, be of good comfort, be of one mind, live in peace, and the God of Love and peace will be with you. profound read

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