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Questions of Heart



Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 28, 2010 at 01:02 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Love | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 125 views

Questions of Heart 
Can you really look for love?
Does love find you?

Once I wasn't looking for love
I was happy being on my own
But somehow along the road
Someone knocked on my door

Hesitant, I opened only my window
Took a peek who's outside the door
But everything in him was so inviting
Unconsciously I have given him the key

The little room where I once lived alone
Became the haven of two loving souls
Blissful moments we shared together
Witnessed by the four walls of my world

But the little room became too crowded
For us two souls who once loved each other
One got choked by the other's affection
The other longed for undying passion

Soon the two souls gone separate ways
Both were lost for love and broken apart
I again find myself alone in my world
But somehow my heart has been changed

Now the room I'm living in turned cold
And I never felt so alone like this before
I wanted his love back but would never be
So I asked myself to find someone else

I only want to be loved for who I am
I only want to share my loving heart
I never wanted grandiose promises
I just want a love that will last forever

Shall I wait for these to come?
Or shall I seek for the right one?
Can I really look for love?
Will love find me again?

But I pray for someone to be there
Who would be ready for undying love
Or is it rightful to say to give up
Because such love wont be around






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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

dazedforever
December 09, 2010

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Moving
Finding a love that's undying and selfless is such a difficult task in this day and age. Not that it does not exist, it does my friend, but it's just....so rare. But you never know, you may get lucky someday . With this piece you have expressed the fear and hopes of so many hearts.Loved the metaphors in your poem. They're absolutely brilliant. You are amazing MJ! ! SL for sure.

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RobinD
November 28, 2010

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Breathtaking
This is so sad and heartbreaking. I've wanted the same things. Love can be so great but also painful.. Your descriptions are amazing and absolutely beautiful.. You have such a gift.. Thank you so much for haring your work..

MagicMJ
November 29, 2010
(Creator)
thanks a lot robin



washedupwriter
November 28, 2010

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MJ.
You never stop amazing me with your writes.
The flow, was flawless with a wonderful rhyme.

The emotion and passion was there for all to feel and see.
You have such a strange way with words, its unbelieveable.

I re-read it 3 times to get the entire feel of it.. and every time i reead it, i felt it all over again.
Great write.
very well done.

(come back to chat.. i miiiiisss you )

MagicMJ
November 29, 2010
(Creator)
heya wuw... thanks a lot...
miss yah too... my laptop is still not working and i can't access the chat room in my phone...

again thanks a biggie






      

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