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A Poem by carolann


Author: carolann
Created: October 14, 2005 at 11:52 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 397 views

SOMETIMES I TALK TO HIM  

I HAVE THIS PAIN GOD IN MY HAND,
TRY MY SPIKES THEY FEEL JUST GRAND
I HAVE A PAIN HERE IN MY HEAD,
WEAR MY CROWN OF THORNS INSTEAD
DID I MENTION PAIN IN MY FEET,
TRY NAILED TOGETHER BY A CLEAT
I GET THIS PAIN IN MY SIDE,
THE WOUND I HAD MY MOTHER CRIED
MY LOVED ONE TURNED HIS BACK ON ME,
AND JUDAS TURNED HIS FOR A FEE
AND DID WE TALK ABOUT MY STRIFE,
FOR ALL OF YOU I GAVE MY LIFE
MY LOVED ONES DIED LEFT ME ALONE,
THIER ALL WITH ME IN MY HOME
DID I TELL YOU ALL I LACK,
I CARRIED A CROSS UPON MY BACK
NEXT TIME LORD WHEN I FUSS,
ILL REMEMBER ALL YOU DID FOR US.

CAROLANN 10/11/05


© carolann - all rights reserved


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roxinal
March 07, 2007
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god that was beautiful, when we think of our sorrows we remember his pain


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butterfly
October 16, 2005
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This is a well written, well thought write...yes we should remember that He shed His blood for us. Georgous!! always, Butterfly


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milligan
October 14, 2005
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Beautifully expressed and written!


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wordsfromthemind
October 14, 2005
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how soon we all forget


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