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Author: MagicMJ

Created: November 27, 2010 at 09:33 pm

Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)

Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 120 views

Nothingness to Share

Sweet
Nice
Good
Naive
Just a few words they used to describe me

They loved me because of that
They left me for being like that
So tell me, what should I be
Should I be the other way around

Tired of being sweet
Tired of being nice
Tired of being good
Tired of being naive

Because I'm more than that
Look at me not with your eyes
Stare at my very soul, you will see
A woman who knows what she wants
And not a girl asking for a lollipop

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Comments & Reviews (

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Little_Mermaid
November 28, 2010

Helpful:

I like this, being torn apart by what other people think

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
November 29, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot mermaid

RobinD
November 27, 2010

Helpful:

Honest.Brilliant

I absolutely loved this, Its amazing... I can totally relate to this and I can just feel what your feeling.. The line "Look at me with your eyes.. Stare at my very soul" I wish someone would do that to me as well.. Thank you so much for sharing

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
November 29, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot robin

byonas
November 27, 2010

Helpful:

this was really good but u were explaing what you wanted to say wich makes it so clear.

Additional Comments (1)

MagicMJ
November 29, 2010
(Creator)

thanks a lot byonas

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