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Nothingness to Share

Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 27, 2010 at 09:33 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 149 views

Nothingness to Share 
Just a few words they used to describe me

They loved me because of that
They left me for being like that
So tell me, what should I be
Should I be the other way around

Tired of being sweet
Tired of being nice
Tired of being good
Tired of being naive

Because I'm more than that
Look at me not with your eyes
Stare at my very soul, you will see
A woman who knows what she wants
And not a girl asking for a lollipop

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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)

November 28, 2010

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I like this, being torn apart by what other people think

November 29, 2010
thanks a lot mermaid

November 27, 2010

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I absolutely loved this, Its amazing... I can totally relate to this and I can just feel what your feeling.. The line "Look at me with your eyes.. Stare at my very soul" I wish someone would do that to me as well.. Thank you so much for sharing

November 29, 2010
thanks a lot robin

November 27, 2010

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this was really good but u were explaing what you wanted to say wich makes it so clear.

November 29, 2010
thanks a lot byonas


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