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A Poem by MagicMJ



Author: MagicMJ
Created: November 27, 2010 at 09:33 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 157 views

Nothingness to Share  

Sweet
Nice
Good
Naive
Just a few words they used to describe me

They loved me because of that
They left me for being like that
So tell me, what should I be
Should I be the other way around

Tired of being sweet
Tired of being nice
Tired of being good
Tired of being naive

Because I'm more than that
Look at me not with your eyes
Stare at my very soul, you will see
A woman who knows what she wants
And not a girl asking for a lollipop



© MagicMJ - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)



Little_Mermaid
November 28, 2010
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I like this, being torn apart by what other people think



(Author)
thanks a lot mermaid

 MagicMJ replied on November 29, 2010




RobinD
November 27, 2010
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Honest.Brilliant
I absolutely loved this, Its amazing... I can totally relate to this and I can just feel what your feeling.. The line "Look at me with your eyes.. Stare at my very soul" I wish someone would do that to me as well.. Thank you so much for sharing



(Author)
thanks a lot robin

 MagicMJ replied on November 29, 2010




byonas
November 27, 2010
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this was really good but u were explaing what you wanted to say wich makes it so clear.



(Author)
thanks a lot byonas

 MagicMJ replied on November 29, 2010






      

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