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A Haiku by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: November 26, 2010 at 06:54 pm
Upload Type: Haiku, G (All)  
Category: Humor | Love | Haiku
Upload Stats: 3.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 228 views

Duck Haiku  


A brilliant swimmer

It swims grace and style

Ducks are so very beautiful


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


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emeraldeyes
November 26, 2010
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Not Haiku
Hi TS. . . this poem is not structured correctly to be Haiku with 5, 7, 5 syllables on each line. Let me suggest the following to correct it.

Brilliant swimmer
Quack away in the water
With grace and beauty

Peace! ee


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Caroline
November 26, 2010
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Quackalicious!
I love this. Maybe I love it because I have 2 ducks!! thanks for sharing.cc


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